Angel of Death

I'm back!! Hah I love Zoe and the word lapslut. She just brings a whole different meaning to this world. You detailed every single move that Shuqaio and Zoe did ...

Hello Sam, As I mentioned to someone before, I'm on the random member critiquing bandwagon so I might be dropping in and out every once and a while. On with ...

I'm on the random member bandwagon this week, so don't be surprised if I critique something else of yours in the next couple of days. So hey Via! Well I ...

Hey Alice, haven't read anything from you in a while Well anyways, I thought this was great but it needs a little more polishing. Expand it, explore Heather and Jess's ...

Well Flem that was a bit scary and funny at the same time. You know that little nervous laugh that you make when you don't know whether to through up ...

Hello, well I took a look at the other version of this poem and I thought that it needed more. Since it was locked I came to read this one ...

Oh J!! This was so sad but like ash said, it was amazingly good. I like the way you touched every single emotion and painted the setting as if you ...

Hey Suz!! Tis the first poem I've read in a while. Since I've been away from the poetic world for sometime I must say that this was marvelous. The only ...

Well, I thought this was okay but since I've read Twilight I'm a little upset. This ending was albeit creative and interesting nonetheless. Although, I think everything went by too ...

Ello, There's A Scratch On My CD, Wipe It OFF I saw a lot of errors that do not seem to sit well with me. You sort of make Aaron ...

Hey Kylan, I feel as if you cut open my chest while I'm still up, pulled out my heart, with your bare hands, and now you are playing with it ...

Hello Kylan, I must say that this story should live amongst those white dots that call themselves stars. Maybe then they'll learn what it truly means to shine. You've kept ...

The way you write is exceptional but everything is going by so fast. Take your time, flesh out Jeremy's surroundings. Make his day seem normal before he just automatically gets ...

I read this yesterday but I didn't get a chance to comment. Well anyways, I like the way that you wrote this. You make the world that they live in ...

Hey Clog!! I really enjoyed your story and the names and the weaving of Polish words makes this story even more beautiful. The way you made us see Kazi's emotions ...